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Annessa Young
HIS 201
Reflective Essay
History has never been my strongest subject, but I have always managed to do my best and come out on top. Even though I have never really liked history I have managed to do tremendously well. Sometimes I even surprise myself with the grades that I have made. Writing has never been a problem for me. In high school I always did well on all of my academic papers, although I never really had many history papers to write in high school I figured that writing is simply writing; whether writing for history or not. Now that I am in WISE, writing is combined with history challenging me to do better academically in writing and history. Thus far, this combined challenge has been beneficial to me because usually I don’t like a challenge, nonetheless, now that I see that I can be challenged and do exceedingly well, it makes me more confident about history and not only about history, but it makes me confident when writing for history. Through this semester’s journey in the WISE history program I have grown rapidly; I have gained knowledge about history and I have been challenged beyond my expectations. I have learned more than what I expected and my writing ability for history continues to get better. This evidence has been shown not only in the many blogs that I have had to do, but also in my major assignments. The two major assignments that I will mention will be the Culture Analysis and the Civilization essay.
To begin, the first major paper that I was expected to do in WISE history was the Civilization essay. At the beginning, I was skeptical about it because I thought, “I have no idea how to write this paper,” but with thorough explanation, dedication, and hard work I did it. One of the many things that I learned while doing this essay was about the different civilizations; how
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they derived, and what time period. My weaknesses came when it was time do research. For me research is a drawn out process that frustrates me and makes me feel I am really moving nowhere at a fast pace. But, what I learned while doing this was that I have to be patient and take time to research, and not to procrastinate. Now I see that through that learning experience I use what I didn’t know then to help me when I write papers now. I do not procrastinate and I take time to remember what I did in class or to just research.
However, with my Culture Analysis essay I did wonderfully well. I made a B+. With this essay it was so much easier because, we did many first drafts in English. Since English and History are combined in WISE, when it came time to turn in the Culture Analysis for history it was an easier road to travel. All I had to do was more research and bring out the historical factor. In the beginning this assignment was very hard for me because I didn’t know where to start. The research again just like with the Civilization essay was hard for me as well because this paper was much blunter.
Conversely I think the blogs and the technology factor of this course has benefited in many ways as well. In the beginning blogs were hard for me, after I got the concept that history is about evidence, dates, and also my analysis, it became easier. After a while I managed to do well on my blogs every time. The blogs also gave me a chance to express how I felt about a historical topic, and challenged me. The challenge came when trying to put all of my many thoughts into 20-25 sentences. I didn’t think a formal academic paper, with the factors of an introduction, body paragraph, and conclusion could be converted into a 20-25 sentence paragraph. Technology also made it easier for me because of the convenience factor of not having to print. The luxury of putting most of our work on wordpress.com was convenient too
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because if something was wrong it made it easier to revise and edit. Now I’m better at wordpress.com and now I see that all of those challenges bettered me.
I have learned so much by just being in the WISE history program. I’ve learned about almost every civilization, religion, dynasty, map, and more. I have also learned how to navigate different software (wordpress.com), which is great. I have accomplished so much in this course; my goal for the end of the semester was to get an A and I have managed to do that, and more; and I look forward to growing even more academically next semester.